June 15th, 2013 → 11:20 am @ daped
Greetings friends!
Here’s the updated opening to the book’s marquis chapter: Tuna Breath. I originally didn’t reveal my obsession with, or the identity of, the weight scale until the end of the chapter. But I re-wrote it with more transparency after a good friend pointed out how some future readers may misinterpret the message. Apparently, you can be too clever! Anyway, here’s the excerpt. Enjoy!
Doug P.
